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Contagious by ~takusan-no-ai:icontakusan-no-ai:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I feel it on my skin
Seeping into my blood,
Winding its venom around my heart,
Tightening its unholy grip.

Through my blurry eyes I look up
Around at my surroundings.
And through my sickness
I can tell everyone else has it too.
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Falling for a "in-demand" guy just isn't the way to go. Or so I've learned back in eighth grade... Meaning that I had a crush on one once a long (two years... long to me) time ago...

*RawEm0tion's week's theme: Contagious.

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~CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane: May 13, 2008, 12:33:50 PM
With this sort of poem I think it would have been best if you made it a bit longer. I had no idea you were talking about romance until I saw what you submitted it under... and then I read your description. And that's my :twocents: worth.

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~takusan-no-ai:icontakusan-no-ai: May 13, 2008, 6:26:44 PM
It would have probably been best ^^; Thanks for your comment!

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~CartheInsane:iconCartheInsane: May 13, 2008, 6:29:11 PM
You're welcome! :)

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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 14, 2008, 12:25:43 AM
CartheInsane...:lol:
But yeah, I thought you were talking about the flu!!!
But it works for crushes too!!!

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~takusan-no-ai:icontakusan-no-ai: May 14, 2008, 1:14:39 AM
True, it can go both ways :D That was my intention while writing it :paranoid: Thanks for the comment!

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=th3krimzon1:iconth3krimzon1: May 14, 2008, 3:50:49 AM
you're welcome!

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Quiet emotion is actually very, very, loud.
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